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Lemontwistby ~Killagouge

Cartoons & Comics / Digital Media / Cartoons / Vector

Here is RawrCharlieRawr's [Sometimes NSFW] OC, Lemontwist.

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Critique by ~S0ULxASSASS1N Feb 4, 2013, 10:18:18 PM

This is a fairly well created vector.
You have kept with the My Little Pony style, and it seems to be very well layered and planned out in it's creation.
Seeing as this is an OC, and you did well with what I know from previous sketches of the character, I give this artwork an 8.5/10 overall score.
A few touches that really gave the character life were the glasses, and your well rendered eyes.
As an artpiece, this is one of the better OC creations that I have seen by such a little known artist.
This deserves a thumbs up!

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